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Chapter One: Black Horizon.

Avengers Tower, if one word can describe the tone of this building’s occupants, mercy isn’t one of them. In the briefing room, the main members of the Avengers that include Captain America, Iron Man, Wolverine, Thor, Black Widow, and Spider Woman look at a hologram replaying “Spider-Man’s” brutal murder of Norman Osborn.

“I don’t know what’s crazier; the fact that Spider-Man just killed Osborn in a heartbeat or that bastard Jameson is defending him?!” Wolverine growled angrily as he tried hard not to slice the holographic projector.

“At ease Logan…” Captain America said calmly “…we’re all shocked at these turns of events. It seems the Spider-Man we’ve seen recently seems to be very “different” for a lack of better words. As of right now, Spider-Man is now a rejected member of the Avengers”

“So Spider-Man has betrayed us? Thou shall not escape lightly.” Thor said with anger.

Captain America then turned to Iron Man, who was looking at a projection show different scales and charts and asked “Tony, you seem unfocused?”

Stark looked up and said “Sorry, been seeing some energy fluctuations recently. Anyway I would say we should apprehend Spider-Man, but it seems he’s much more prepared with every situation and as you told me Steve that you and the team seemed to have faced Spider-Man and he managed to hold his own. So we need a ‘Plan B’.”

Black Widow then stepped in and said “Me and Cap already have that covered. We’ve sent a messenger to talk to our “Plan B”.”

Rogers then turned off the hologram and ordered “And until then: Stark, Logan, and I will go to the mayor’s to convince Jameson to allow the police to help our investigation. We even have officer Carlie Cooper to help us as well.”

“Good luck.” Logan said under his breath as the Avengers left the briefing room.

Meanwhile in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, it seems Octavius’s actions have affected other heroes than those in New York. In his apartment, Eugene “Flash” Thompson, also known as the symbiotic vigilante Agent Venom,  look at his laptop, scrolling through the internet on news of his hero Spider-Man’s actions as it seemed everyone has been shocked.

“This has to be an imposter. I mean it could be Chameleon or Mysterio, right?” Flash thought to himself as he and even the symbiote, though in a slight catatonic state, were dumbstruck of the news and in slight denial.

It was then he received a random email that interrupted his train of thought. Instinctively, he checked it and was from an email address named “Big Red”, though as government agent, he was used to it. Flash then read the actual message that read:

“Put the suit on and meet me on the rooftop now.”

Knowing it was urgent; Flash commanded the symbiote the shape shift into his Venom uniform, and sneaked his way up onto the rooftop. Once there he say an older man with a military uniform with a distinctive mustache.

“Ross.” Agent Venom acknowledged with respect.

“Thompson.” General “Thunderbolt” Ross aka Red Hulk replied as he gave Agent Venom a handshake.

“So why are you here Ross, and how the hell did you get up here?” Venom asked.

“I jumped…” Ross replied with a smirk as he gave Thompson a pamphlet “…and I here to give you a message from Cap.”
“And that would be?” Venom asked as he read the pamphlet and was then his eyes widened.

“Cap told me this, go to Manhattan and have a “chat” Spider-Man. You have a plane waiting for already.” Ross coolly said to a shocked Flash.  

“But sir, why me?” Flash asked as if it was a joke.

“Spider-Man seems much more dangerous than usual as you seen on the news. He’s also a more tenacious bastard and seems to be prepared with very situation, all except you as Spider-Man won’t expect you breathing down his neck. Are we clear Agent Venom?” Thunderbolt Ross asked.

“Yes…sir.” Venom said, still trying to comprehend the idea of facing his idol.

“Also one more thing…” Ross said as he morphed into the Red Hulk “…keep that alien in check.” It was then he leaped off the rooftops at supersonic speeds.

Once alone, Flash sighed deeply and said “He’s gone Brock, I know your there.”

In that instant, red mass “materialized” in thin air until it revealed Eddie Brock, aka Toxin.

“It seems you’re getting better at using the symbiote’s senses than we last met, its bond seems to be stronger.” Brock hissed.

“What do you want Brock?” Venom asked with a strong hint of suspicion.

Toxin was unfazed by Flash’s aggression and said “Was seeing you have that cancer in check as I don’t want any innocence people hurt if you attacked Hulk, but seems you are quite “friendly” with the good general.”

“Yeah well I got a mission to go so if you’re done being an ass with me, I would appreciate you keeping this city safe while I’m gone while I come up an excuse for the school while I’m gone. Also since you like to bite the heads off of thugs keep you appetites in check Brock and don’t go overboard.” Venom threatened his “grandson”.  

“Whatever you say granddad, I was going to make sure the streets are safe from scum anyway, but I have a warning that involves you’re appetites. Your monster will immediately try to kill Spider-Man if it has the chance, and though he’s now the monster he truly is, keep that thing in control or it’ll be the death of you.” Brock warned as he webbed swung off the roof while Flash went back to his apartment to prepare for his mission.

Back at New York, specifically town hall, it seems as if a civil war between politics and heroes as Captain America, Wolverine, Iron Man and Carlie Cooper tried to convince Mayor Jameson to set out a warrant for the arrest of Spider-Man.

“HOGWASH! WHY SHOULD I GIVE A WARRANT FOR THAT HERO’S ACTIONS AGAINST OSBORN!” Jameson yelled, outraged for Captain America’s request.

Wolverine, annoyed but Jameson’s reaction, said “Look Jameson, you realize you’re hiding a goddamn murderer!”

“Logan, stand down!” Captain America ordered as Wolverine reluctantly did. Rogers then turned to Jameson and said “Mayor, in this country, murder is a crime, and right now you’re defending a murderous criminal.”

“And you think you costumed freaks are in the right!? All you do is sent scum into the slammer and they always seem to come back to do more damage! Spider-Man is giving my fine city a permanent solution your problems!” Jameson yelled at Rogers before turning his attentions at Carlie “And you of all people should agree with me officer Copper!”

An annoyed Carlie pushed her glasses up and said “I have a duty to protect people from criminals. I know Spider-Man and I have been collecting evidence showing we might have an impostor on our hands.”

Tony Stark was about to say his side until the computer in his armor says “UNKNOWN ENERGY SIGNATURE HAS BEEN DETECTED.” To which Iron Man tells the computer “Tell me later, I have bigger issues going on.”

“Actual those readings are part of the problem.” A mysterious voice was heard from behind.

Everyone turns around to see a somewhat obscured figure dressed in a strange red and blue costume with a red spider/skull emblem and Jameson yells “WHO THE HELL IS THIS JOKER!”

“Easy…” the mystery man said as he walked out of the shadows “…I’m Spider-Man of the year 2099, and I’m here to fix time itself.”

Unknown to them, a simple thug had just recently robbed a gas station and is now running for his life. To the average person he should be running as he’s a criminal, but what’s chasing him is much more devious.

“Dammit…Dammit!” He muttered “I tried to go big while I was with Owl, then joined Goblin’s army, but once I went solo, I tried to get a…”

He was then grabbed at the throat by Spider-Man (Otto Ocatius) and feel his life now draining him.

“Tried to escape me you filthy degenerate!?” Otto demanded as be punched the thug so hard that he knocked a good portion of his teeth out.

“I killed Osborn of all people, soon I rid this city all of its black stains!” Octavius proclaimed as he was about to finish his work before suddenly…

“Drop the man and put your hands in the air Spider-Man!” A voice above them threatened.

Otto turned quickly and saw Agent Venom right behind him, pointing a pistol pint blank range at his skull.

To be continued.
Spider-Man and all related characters©Marvel Comics

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I would've got this done A LOT sooner but I recently moved and didn't have enough time to get this done as planned. But with that said, this new chapter brings in Agent Venom and the Avengers have a new ally to stop Otto. And when planning this series, I looked into other Spidey stories like Spider-Island were it affected many books and characters of those books get more focus, so here this is like if the next part of the story was in a Venom issue and as such Venom has more focus here and why Toxin has a cameo as well. Please comment below on your thoughts on this chapter and stay tune as Kaine will enter the game next chapter.
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AzabacheSilver Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You do better dialogue of the Avengers than the current writer of the comic XD
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well I haven't read any Avengers book as I focus reading Spider-Man related books and Deadpool but I am glad you like how I wrote them in this chapter :D
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Super-Metal-Sonic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
looks nice so far. I quite like the cliffhanger at the end there. I certainly look forward to seeing how this story turns out
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks and stay tuned for the next chapter as the Scarlet Spider will appear ;)
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Super-Metal-Sonic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
I was wondering if he was going to be showing as well
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yep, it's essential Spider-Ock vs. Spider-Man 2099, Agent Venom, and Scarlet Spider in this fanfic :D
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Super-Metal-Sonic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
neat
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ArcanePhotographer Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Seems good so far :)
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:iconblacksuitchris:
blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! What do you like about this chapter?
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ArcanePhotographer Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
I really like the premiss & I like how people react to Oct's actions.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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ArcanePhotographer Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
No problems :)
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Leonhearted Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Good so far
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:iconblacksuitchris:
blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! What do you like in this chapter?
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Leonhearted Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Well I'm glad that you made the avengers less ignorant
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. To be honest that's my major complaint of Superior Spider-Man, it seems everyone is an idiot to see Otto's veil of lies
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seanc001 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Love how the story's heading Chris. I can not wait for the next chapter. Although since he probably possesses Peter's memories of Flash bullying him, SPock is not going down without a fight.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Actually in issue 9 of Superior Spidey, Otto erased all of Peter's memories when he purged the Peter remnants so Otto has a major disadvantage against Agent Venom as Otto has very limited expierences against symbiotes
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seanc001 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I see, good to know. I can only imagine how the conversation with spiderman 2099 is going go:

Mayor J.J.J.: So you're telling me that the Spiderman who punched out Scorpion's jaw, brutally beat up Vulture, Boomerang, Screwball, Jester, White Dragon, and The Owl, clashed with Cardiac and killed Massacre and The (Green) Goblin King is really Doctor Octopus who switched bodies with the real Spiderman, so he wouldn't die in his old body.

Spiderman 2099: Pretty much.

Mayor J.J.J.: That is the most stupidest thing I have ever heard in the my life!!!!

Spiderman 2099: The only stupid thing around here is the Hitler mustache you keep on sporting.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha you got what's going to happen between Jameson and Spidey 2099 will be more intense and will be worst when Scarlet Spider enters the story ;)
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seanc001 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Really? That's interesting. By the way, I know this might sound stupid but are the following people going to find out that Peter Parker was originally Spiderman: May Parker, J. Jonah Jameson Sr., Agent Venom, and Mayor J.J.J.?
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Let's just say the scope of both Peter's and Otto's reveal is MUCH larger ;)
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Clone56 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Another good part. I think you should maybe proof-read next time for grammer, though. But other than that it was good.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks and will do. Also what's your favorite aspect of this chapter?
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Clone56 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
I like how you didn't put as much emphasis on Otto and the multitude of characters like Ross, Toxin, and Wolverine. The cliffhanger was also good.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! When formulating the format of this fanfic, I wanted to make it like a major crossover in the current Spidey related books and as such this chapter would be as if it's in the Venom comics and last chapter is in Superior Spidey
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Clone56 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Can I assume the next chapter would be in Scarlet Spider?
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yep and there'll be a battle between Octavius and Agent Venon ;)
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Clone56 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
:la: Yay Kaine! Can't wait!
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Shineman Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Damn, shit just got serious! Very awesome job and love the cliffhanger! Can't wait to see Flash manhandle SpOck! ^_^
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks and Venom vs. SpOck will be epic and also though I won't saw much, Scarlet Spider will enter the story next chapter! Also what's your favorite aspect of this chapter?
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Shineman Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
I would say my favorite aspect would be Flash thinking it's Mysterio or Chameleon making the Spider-Man name look bad.

Besides, Flash is Spidey's number 1 fan and knows the wall-crawler inside and out.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yep, he's in slight denial for Octavius's actions but what Flash thinks of his "hero' will be shattered next chapter ;)
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Shineman Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Yeah, Octavius is smart, but he is really stupid on everything.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
And his pride and arrogance underestimates both his peers and advisaries and in this fanfic, it's going to MAJORLY backfair
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ant-Edd Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
i like it
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! What's your favorite aspect of this chapter?
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ant-Edd Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
that oct-spider heading for a ass whooping
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh what a giant beat down Otto is going to get ;)
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ant-Edd Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
yup it make me happy to think about it to bad everyone in the comic set on dumbass something not right to give him one.It also funny how every mind reader no were to be found
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
One was even conveniently (or inconveniently) put into a coma as Madame Web 2 went into a coma right before AMS#700
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ant-Edd Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
that a pity at this rate spiderman going to be like the puncher soon killing every gad guy he meets it a shame
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SpiderTrekfan616 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw Yeah, this is gettin' good!:D
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yes it is! Also what do you like about this chapter?
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SpiderTrekfan616 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the talk between Brock and Flash as well as the fact that Flash is gonna have to come up with a cover story for his absence from the school.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well it seemed natural as having him up and leave for a mission will seem rushed and silly so I added that realism into that aspect. Also it was fun doing Brock and Flash's dialogue :D
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AraghenXD Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm liking!

I like how you threw in Broxin.
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! I wanted what I'm going with this fanfic like it crossed over with the current Spidey related books so here this would be as if it was in a Venom comic and as such I wanted to bring in Broxin and to be honest, writing him and Flash's dialogue was really enjoyable :D
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AraghenXD Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I can see that!
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blacksuitchris Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
And next week Kaine will enter the story while Otto and Flash will duke it out! :D
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